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  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Billi Wack - Chapter 1

    This is probably the best beginning for a book I've read in a while on this site. I mean, not that I didn't know the leader was going to die. ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Ruby of Revenge [Part 4]

    Hey there, Lightsong. I saw that this short story's been in the green room for a while now, and since you've said that you wouldn't mind if I review it, ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Quest for Fire Book one ~ Into the Mists Chapter 18

    Not a bad ending. Not a bad ending at all. I mean, I'm glad it didn't rip my heart out or anything, and I'm excited to see how these four ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Quest for Fire Book one ~ Into the Mists Chapter 17

    And we're back again! While I'm listening to Welcome to Nightvale and reviewing your work, I'm truly enjoying how this is going. I'm ready for the peaceful (or murderous and ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Quest for Fire Book one ~ Into the Mists Chapter 16

    I do not like the sound of Emerald not coming back after three sundowns. I mean, I know this is irrational--what could happen within the span of two more chapters? ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Quest for Fire Book one ~ Into the Mists Chapter 15

    This felt like a filler chapter overall. I'm not sure if the raptors were an interesting thing to explore, because are they really going reveal themselves to be sentient and ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Quest for Fire Book one ~ Into the Mists Chapter 14

    Oooh, we're going to the wisp talon village. I'm pretty sure Shiraku is going to kill him when he gets back, but we're going on an adveeenttuuuuuuuuurrreee! Anyway. I don't ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Quest for Fire Book one ~ Into the Mists Chapter 13

    Finally, we find the MacGuffin. But there are at least five more chapters left, so obviously this can't be the end of the book. So obviously, it'll only get more ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Quest for Fire Book one ~ Into the Mists Chapter 12

    You should know that by now my goal is to finish this entire novel within Review Day. Why? Because I've gone insane and I don't know how to stop, I'm ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Quest for Fire Book one ~ Into the Mists Chapter 11

    Aww. Aww. You know, after being bombarded with cliffhanger ending after cliffhanger ending, it's great to see an ending that isn't a cliffhanger and warms the heart. I sort of ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Quest for Fire Book one ~ Into the Mists Chapter 10

    How strange. The other reviewer I'm used to seeing around these parts isn't here now. Oh well, I guess that leaves me by my lonesome. This was certainly an interesting ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Quest for Fire Book one ~ Into the Mists Chapter 9

    Dun, dun, dun! Well, that was definitely an interesting chapter. You're ending on more suspenseful notes as each chapter progresses, which is great, but I'm at least somewhat sure that ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Horror Re: The Start of a Legend

    Before I start--what is Mary Ann Nichols, a prostitute, doing befriending the niece of the Queen in a classist society like Victorian England? Was she not a prostitute when she ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: The Origins of the Modern Metro Manila

    Well, I just argued with you about this piece for a solid twenty minutes, so I might as well review it now. And when I say argue, I mean it ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Other » Teen Fiction, Fanfiction Re: Jamaica: A phanfic

    I'll admit, I haven't read any hardcore fanfiction since Sherlock murdered me, so I'm not sure how to deal with this. With my little knowledge of Dan and Phill and ...

    Jun 26, 2016


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— Ron Swanson (Parks and Rec)