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Hi, i loved your poem, very unique and truthful. Spelling was brilliant so i have no criticism in that respect. The honey melts into my ears, flowing down my throat ...

Hi :) I liked this poem very much, i felt that i could really relate to it so it actually had meaning to me. I couldn't find any spelling/grammatical errors ...

Very nice work ShadowKnight :) I could not find any spelling mistakes so good job there :) I will say however, even though i enjoyed reading this piece, there was ...

Hi Laura :) I loved your prologue, and i adore your style of writing :) I only noticed a few spelling mistakes (Pong lol) so i wont go in to ...

Hi :) I loved your story, it had so many layers and twists, it was a treat to read :) I couldn't find many faults so i will try to ...

Boolovesyou made all the points worth making with her brilliant review :) So i am just gonna say - Very clever and thoughtful poem, hope to see you post more ...

Its a very original poem, i have never seen one set out in such a... Timelined fashion, it works well, but i feel the paragraphs need more substance, and it ...

I agree with Boo, it needs more passion, instead of giving us the story and feeding it to us, let us sit down and feast to our hearts content. I ...

I get it, like Alice in wonderland from a different perspective? Very original idea :) For a prologue, i think this is perfect, not revealing too much information, but revealing ...

Very nice! I felt like i was actually there :) Not much more i could say as it was quite short but very nice work, i hope to see more ...