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Really good in my opinion, the rhyming was well made, the weight was correct and flowing, and the words powerful and interesting. I think there was a bit of nonsense ...

I loved the story and the characters, the descriptions were amazing and sucked me right into the plot, I also liked the ideology behind the story. The only thing I ...

I once again am not sure this doesn't fit in lyric poetry (as it turns out I am a lyric poetry paranoid) I liked it a lot, the party was ...

Even though the rhyming can do with some work, I liked your poem very much. The part on the end where you started every sentence with- "love, without her" was ...

The rhyming and weight themselves were a-bit off and shaky. The emotion compensated for that. some I liked less, but I loved the first, it was- in my opinion- the ...

I enjoyed your poem very much, as someone who sometimes can feel really unsecured- I really connected to it. I liked the way you began with the description of two ...

It was great, philosophical, interesting, well written and touching- anything really- except for being a story. Allow me to explain, it was a great thing still is, in-fact, but I ...

I loved the story! It's a disgrace you were so afraid to publish! It was excellent, you didn't needed to go into worlds beyond our own, to anywhere further then ...

Very touching, yet no fancying around, that's very impressive. This work is exactly the type I'm looking for when shuffling, short, fun to read, and not (vocabulary wise) difficult. I ...

I have to admit I didn't manage to read all of it, I had a very important Email. From what I have read (3/4) I really enjoyed, the fantasy was ...

It's really nice. I think everyone can identify with this. I think the fact It's incomplete is what completes it, because it passes the feeling of the block very lively. ...

The social message is one we could all appreciate, however, I personally didn't think you were sticking with the more material and important parts of it. the writing was well, ...

It was good, you didn't hesitate with the violence of the scene, and described it despite the brutality. two things however, maybe I lost you at some point, but I'm ...

I think this is an interesting point of view on religion. i'm not sure i follow your point, but your arguments and thought are never the less fascinating the writing ...

I don't know much about African culture and stuff, but I think I know a thing or two about stories- and this one was good. the detailed description was well ...