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I liked the philosophical attitude a lot, I think that you really represented well a situation of harder than death terms. One problem however, was that the discussion between your ...

I liked it, you wrote harshly, cruelly, with no compassion to your characters- You wrote real, that's really rare. I thought, though, that you overdid it a little, at some ...

I might have to risk in repeating the words of others, probably saying it in a worse manner as well, but this particular story have completely drew my attention. I ...

I read your first chapter, and I recall asking you for the next, took you long enough! just kidding of course, but I really enjoyed this, I think that some ...

"the idea you could disappear without it being noted grows in you, until you’re consumed by it." Did you mean to write 'noticed'? Because 'noted' is alright, but it's a ...

“You think she’ll be alright?” “She’ll never be the same, but her memories will fade, eventually.” (Suggested, not required, but I think it’s better that way) “Thank you, Dr. Stevens,�

It's very short, and very beautiful, but the story did felt a bit pointless, which disturbed me. Especially because I love very short stories, and they usually end with a ...

I liked it, a lot, however, several things for your notice: "People say it's plain to see, People say it's clear. That if you just run away I would just ...

All Christians, please do not assault me, but I have to say that although I understand what you're trying to say, I still find the lines: "Our guide is unkown ...

Angry and beautiful, that's a lovely poem. I liked how you started with the metaphors about death and got to the real 'issue' only after I heard death speak a ...

I liked it a lot, the name fits perfectly, as a title and as a returning line. There were some problems here and there, like misfit rhyming or forced rhyming, ...

I loved it, it was interesting and very thrilling, with rock-solid characters, I want more soon, or else... Folius, first publish! I'm very proud of you! Keep the good work. ...

There was only a desk and it's chair in the stark white room I was in You should (in my opinion) change that a little, I loved the "stark white ...

The poem was great in my opinion- as well as other's, I'm sure- especially this part: Blue Oceans leak into my ears, releasing a voice that whispers in my head, ...

Wow, I don't know what led you to write this, but I'm sorry, it must have been awful. The poem was amazing, I could feel the pain and grief "coming ...