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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: S.P.I. Chapter 2

    Thanks! For your first comment, I kinda just assumed it would be obvious. Usually when I type I smudge the keys on my keyboard just because of the contact made ...

    May 29, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: S.P.I. Chapter 2

    Thanks for the review! I did actually cover the backstory at the beginning of chapter 1, a little too much. The breakup with Theo is emotional because he cheated on ...

    May 29, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: S.P.I. Chapter One

    Thanks for the review! I'm going to try and edit it this week since my school year just ended on Friday. I haven't had much time for editing with finals ...

    May 29, 2017
  • Lyrics » Narrative, Action / Adventure Re: The Snow Globe that Wouldn't Shatter

    I see. That's even better! I totally agree.

    May 29, 2017
  • Other » Dramatic, Theatre Re: Dragon's Soliloquy

    What can I say except your welcome? I'm glad I liked it too!

    May 29, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: S.P.I. Chapter 2

    Thanks so much! I really appreciate your comments. I'll fix it ASAP!

    May 28, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: S.P.I. Chapter One

    Thanks!

    May 27, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Rain of Thoughts

    This poem is very nice. I like how the character in the poem ignores the voice and walks away. It's definitely something I would have done. The title fits very ...

    May 26, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Teardrops

    Aw, nice. I like this because it is my life basically in a nutshell.

    May 25, 2017
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: Doctor Who: Children of Mephistopheles

    Thanks! Yeah, I had a limited length and I really wanted to write a Doctor Who fanfic, so I ended up having to remove a lot of detail. I had ...

    May 23, 2017
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: Doctor Who: Children of Mephistopheles

    Thanks for the review. Your comments really make sense to me and I agree. Most of them I'd already noticed. I actually wrote this for a school assignment when we ...

    May 23, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Satire Re: Frost Lark News 5/21/17

    That's alright. It happens to the best of us.

    May 22, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: S.P.I. Chapter One

    Thank you so much Rosey! Your comment is very helpful. It makes sense, now that I think about it. I'll try to make it more interesting.

    May 22, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Satire Re: Frost Lark News 5/21/17

    Wow. So, I'm new, and I really love you right now. You have opened up a whole new world for me. Seriously, this is amazing. Obviously I haven't read the ...

    May 22, 2017


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