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I feel like an ootsider myself, just hopping in like this, but I have to say, you did an amazing job. This chapter could easily stand by itself. It wasn't ...

Hey! I just ended up here by chance, but I like action and adventure, so maybe I'll stick around for a while. Where do I begin? I like the writing ...

Hey, Horison! I like the story! It was touching how she wanted to protect the egg, something beautiful and natural, and yet so dangerous. I like the way she found ...

Yes! And that ominous "for now" at the beginning! Hey, I'm back for another review. I haven't been on for a while, otherwise I would have read this chapter earlier. ...

Hey! Intriguing beginning. I feel like you have a few too many scene breaks though. I think the story line is good. Menacing, for sure, but good. I think the ...

Hey, Chaser! This is some quality writing; you're goin' places, kid! Your dialogue tags are original and Virgo's terrible humor is almost iconic because he's so unapologetic about it and ...

Hey, erilea. I like this story and how you managed to bring out the character of each of the four horsemen in the four dancing people. It was really interesting ...

Hey Katnes! Your story was very engaging. Good job. Unfortunately there were some things that I would like to point out. There were a couple sentences that could be improved. ...

Hey! I love your story! The scenes are great, the dialogue is great, the them is great. I love your characters. I can relate to this story, so of course ...

Hey! I'm just gonna jump right in. The idea for the poem is a tad cliche, but it's fine. I'm a bit confused about the " When this happens my ...

It can be really hard to write reviews of religious material because everyone has different beliefs, so I hope I can do this justice. I like the peace, hope, faith, ...

Hey, I'm back! I like this chapter. It has a lot of detail. But I still have some stuff for you. 1.Your character has several realizations. If you add some ...

Hello again! I decided to keep reading. I enjoyed this part, especially the meeting with Apollo. It went as expected. I'm really glad that Caleb and Katy's relationship is working ...

Hey! I like your story. It was kind of perfect how Apollo claimed him when he was about to have his first kiss. It's such an Apollo thing to do. ...

Hey! I really liked your essay. But I'm wondering, what was the prompt. It would be a lot easier to review if I knew what your premise was. Your speculations ...