StupidSoup

This is a fine poem with a gimmick.

What?

Fair enough. There are a couple grammatical errors that im sure some people pointed out. You have good formatting but the poem never seems to go anywhere. It says the ...

A couple things. Life say’s everything happens for a reason but you’re the one to blame The sentence your going for is "They say everything happens for a reason". That ...

This didn't really work out.

Very very nice. Great job.

So its a story about a woman who has no friends and relatively no life and has a cat that hates her.

You've impressed me.

OK. Fine work. Good job.

Wha.....what..... What? I think I know what your trying to say but uh, the lack of words doesn't help. Just add more words. Add anything.

OK first off this is REALLY HARD TO READ. Not because its bad but because the ideas are so jumbled. You present so much in just a few sentences which ...

Aww that's sad. There's a typo up there where you use "caused" instead of cost. It's a bit repetitive. The last two verses don't match the rest of the poem ...

It's OK I guess

bahahahahahayournotfunnyillseeyouinhell ;)

Aaaaah. A poem that actually deserves the spotlight. Word choice needs work. Otherwise I like it.