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Silverquill, you are quite the poet. I loved this poem, its hard to describe why, because I feel like its all written there in the poem itself! Fantastic.

I agree with RavenLord's review. Sometimes when I write stories, I want to keep it ambiguous and see if anyone can figure it out. I intentionally leave out a lot ...

No probs sweetie. And to be honest, I think "30 days" fits better than "Day 30" because "30 days" implies accidental, whereas "Day 30" sounds like she's doing it on ...

Ouch. The way you wrote that hits hard, man, because its so true. I am glad I was able to make you feel so powerful but I hope I didn't ...

Hiii Gandalf the Pink -- I mean Vilnus. XD Thanks for the review! I appreciate it. It was quite a short poem, and I want to work on fleshing things ...

Stellarjay Thank you! This is great advice, and I find that my number 1 criticism is that I do not flesh things out or go into enough detail -- seriously ...

Thank you so much. I have never heard that song from Queen but I'm sure its awesome. And yes, I do agree with you on the flow issue. It was ...

Thank you so much for the review! I appreciate you pointing out that there is not much imagery going on here, and I do see what you're saying. I haven't ...

Ohhh I see! Very interesting! I couldn't even sense the "frustration" because I guess you really did end it with humility (like, ok, let him wonder if he wants to ...

This comment is just a glitch so I went back and edited it to write this. I'm not even sure how this got here.

So beautifully formatted! I love the illustration, its adorable. This poem fills me with wonder *o*

Hey there, thanks for the review! I hadn't even noticed the transition between how the first stanza was not as intense at all and didn't seem to lead up to ...

*fist bumps back* Whoo!

I can totally understand that; That's kind of something I see in my own writing. Some people might not get it but its because only I would get it XD ...

I would definitely check them out sometime!