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No problem! I love your poem and I want it the best :)

Actually when I look back at what you have written (about the good-looking lover), I like the original better. I wonder if you changed it to simply "I don't need ...

Hey again, Euphoria8. So, I liked your original last 4 lines a lot better, I felt like they were amazing. I definitely think "good-looking lover" made the flow better. However, ...

Binary is a number system, and I guess the fluid person would be a bit like a quantum computer. If anything, that is a closer analogy.

Thank you for the review, but actually it is not about gender at all. I'm simply using the words fluid to describe a person who is always flaky and keeping ...

Oh no no, I meant that it is a very sad story and I'm sorry for you :( When I posted my review, I wrote a whole comment and then ...

Wow, this is... really sad. :( I'm sorry to hear, it is a very difficult time.

This is *not* a reference to gender binary and gender fluid. Not in the slightest. This poem has no connection to that. I say this because I think many people ...

Hey, Alliyah! Thanks for the pointers. Eventually I'd like to try a more flowery, descriptive style and see if that is something I could incorporate into my current style. Much ...

Mahira, thank you for the well wishes... that was very sweet of you and I am touched. I am grateful that all of my readers are on this journey with ...

Thank you

Thanks for the review. I do see how the lines are uneven, and it does kind of throw off the poetic rhythm a little bit. I really appreciate this review, ...

No problem! I'm still learning myself. :P

Heheh XD

Yep, I started that way too. I was surprised at how deep the reviews can get! Peeps will break everything down and explain lots of different parts of the poem. ...