Stripeslife

Man, I totally understand everything. Sadly I've been there more than once, and I know people who have been there way more often than me. I think this is a ...

Thank you very much. I'm one of those writers who like to start with very little planning and then clean it up later, so after starting chapter two, I think ...

Thanks for the advice! This is one of my first lyrical poems so I haven't had much practice with this particular type of poetry. Thanks again! :)

Thanks so much! That really helped! I never would have figured that out. :)

I didn't mean for it to be all one stanza, but to split it into 4 line stanzas. The thing is I'm still new here and when I posted it, ...

Thanks for the review. In this poem, I tried to keep the rhyming to the softer and less obvious level, rather than the harder rhyming of "disaster" and "master". I ...

Thanks. That was the purpose of the poem, to make people feel and inform them that what people look or act like sometimes hides the inner struggles and scars that ...

Thanks bunches!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Thanks so much for reviewing! The lines you said you didn't understand meant that she had pain that she couldn't control, so she distracted her mind with food so that ...

Then you just got yourself a follower!! I'll be waiting! :)

Thanks a lot! I meant for the first and third of your nitpicks to be there because or the repetition and the pause. The second one though, I can see ...

Thanks for your little nitpick. I never would have noticed that (not good at grammar). I wrote this poem about a year or so ago, but I'm alright now. Thanks ...

Thanks for the review! A lot of my poetry is depressing because I usually use it to get thoughts and emotions across that I don't know how to in any ...

Anytime. Also, one motto that I live by with my writing is "The day I have nothing to correct and get better at is the day I should stop writing". ...