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Storygirl95

Storygirl95

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Never Forget

    Hi! It's me, Storygirl95 dropping by for a review. Pieces like this make me love the Green Room because I get to see them before they become popular. This was ...

    Sep 12, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Wedding

    Hi there! Storygirl95 here! Just thought I'd drop by with a review. Well then. You said the ending was predictable, but I certainly didn't expect that. I thought they would ...

    Jun 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: As You Leave

    Hi aouther2b! Just dropping by for a review on review day! This poem is really sad. It has a melancholic feel to it that I can't seem to shake. We've ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Other » General, Dramatic Re: words

    Hi herbgirl! Just dropping by for a review. First off, let me say that this is a very meaningful poem. I can relate to the feeling of words and the ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Hardest Choice

    Hi! First off, let me say I'm so sorry for your loss. I understand how that feels, and therefore this poem almost makes me cry. I love your diction and ...

    Oct 16, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: "Dont Go"

    Hi Sleeplessend! I really like your poem! It makes me think of my imaginary friend when I was younger. I like your descriptive adjectives and the pleading notes throughout the ...

    Oct 15, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Hesitant Spider

    Hi! This poem is absolutely chilling! I can imagine the thoughts of a spider catching prey. But to me, it seems more like human interaction, which only lends to the ...

    Oct 15, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Fantasy Re: Kat is Cray

    Hi Jcsmooth! This poem is really beautiful! As a girl, I can tell you that if someone wrote this for me my heart would explode with happiness! It's very sweet. ...

    Oct 14, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: I see her, everyday.

    Hi krizshelbenalycabral! This is a beautiful poem, and it makes me happy. I also find myself becoming sad when I read the second part, mostly because it's so true and ...

    Oct 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: To See You Leave

    Hi aouther2b! This poem is great at displaying the sadness and lost feeling the character is having. I really liked how you condensed such emotion into so few words. Like ...

    Oct 14, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: i fumble with the keys a lot

    Hi Persy! First off, i would like to say this was a beautiful piece. I can feel the awkwardness and the sadness in the poem, and it definitely spoke to ...

    Oct 14, 2013


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