Storybraniac

Fixed that

Oh wait. I didn't realize the white blood would be a confusion. This poem was focusing on issues of sexuality. Sorry for the misunderstanding. :)

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Glad you liked it. Hope things will work out in your relationship. See ya around. :)

I'm glad you liked it :D

Glad you enjoyed the poem! It would be a great idea to drag the ending to another poem, like a part 2.

Thank you!!! It%u2019s helps out when people improvement ideas, though ic ant really take credit for the bold lines. They%u2019re actually song lyrics.

Thank you for the review!! Really new to this poetry thing, so this helps. The two lines in bold are actually song lyrics, which I based the poem on.

Thank you for the insightful review! its really a help since I%u2019m new to the whole poetry thing. Hope to see ya around.

Glad you enjoyed it :)

Yours is cool too. I%u2019m always into artsy stuff.

:)

Thank you!!! The last three lines are a song lyric. Glad you liked the poem.

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