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Re: Dandelions Are Very Misunderstood
I liked it, it makes me wish it was summmer even more than I did before. *Sighhh* Oh well, you're poem was really good, I would just get rid of ...
Feb 15, 2010 -
Re: Sick Obsession
This is good, I can relate. The rhyme's kind of off a little and is sort of simple, but still good.
Feb 14, 2010 -
Re: Never stopping.
I thought this was great, I love the imagery in this and the message I took away from it. Awesome. :) I especially LOVED the first stanza.
Feb 14, 2010 -
Re: Keep Fighting
This is an awesome poem, it has a great rhythm and message; it's worded really cleverly too. ;)
Feb 13, 2010 -
Re: Weakness?
Man, this is awesome!!! :)I think this is a great poem; like callmeLily73 said, it really caught my eye and spoke to me.
Feb 13, 2010 -
Re: Mind in the Sky
Winie-- Thanks so much for the advice!!! I LOVE getting help on this stuff, so it really means a lot. I like a lot of your ideas, and I agree ...
Feb 12, 2010