StoryWeaver13

I hate short, pointless comments. But I only have one word. Beautiful.

Wow, really cool idea here. Kind of sad and eerie at the same time. There was a really clear mental picture in my head, and the whole thing was just ...

I thought this was a nice poem. It was simple but sweet, and there really weren't any major errors that jumped out at me. Overall I thought this was a ...

*Liked Wow, this was soo good! I haven't seen such a good piece on YWS for a while. Unfortunately, this means that I have no nitpicks. Darn.

Thanks! And fearless, I'll definitely snoop around for your novel. ;) Edit: Oh, yeah, and for anybody looking for chapter 2, I accidentally posted it under short stories, so just ...

Thanks. For whatever reason, the novel wouldn't let me add chapters to this, so now both chapter 1 and 2 are (or should be) under another novel page with the ...

But I think you should give it a title, how would you feel if your parents left you nameless? I think you should name it 'Life is Good'. Well thanks, ...

Uh, GENIUS! Just sayin'. Yeah, this isn't something to critique, just something to enjoy. It's soo cool. Well, what else is there to say...? Keep writing, StoryWeaver

Shoot, I put it under short stories instead of novels!!! *sigh*....

Oh my gosh, this is the second time on this site I've been compared to Shel Silverstein!!! Not a bad thing, though, I read his work constantly when I was ...

Thanks simplycomplex, I always find your advice really helpful. :)

@ultraviolet and theBlackSheep Thanks, glad you liked it. @Thrillhouse Well, not much of a comment, but an opinion's an opinion I guess. Thanks for sharing yours. @Navita Thanks for the ...

Well there's really not much to review here, but it's really cool. Did you take this picture yourself? If you got it off the internet it's plagarism, but if not ...

Yikes, you can't see it. Or, I can't anyway. Canislupis said she couldn't either so...might wanna try uploading it again; I'm far from a computer wiz, but you probably put ...

Thanks to both, and yeah, luckily I did end up overcoming this as I got older, so the story itself doesn't have a happy ending but I like to think ...