StoryWeaver13

Yay! Someone else on a mission to brighten up the depressing poetry section on this site. :D This was quirky and fun, simple but sweet, and I really like it. ...

These are all the reasons I love this site! I can be on here for a straight hour and never feel like I'm wasting my time, like I do just ...

Hey, thanks for reviewing the first chapter of my novel, thought maybe I'd return the favor! First going out and touching on a couple of things that people already pointed ...

Ayra gaped at her. Because cats like that don’t exist, or shouldn’t. Because you threw it off of me as if it weighed nothing. Because I saw my homeroom teacher ...

After following 3 chapters of my story, I feel like the least I can do is review something of yours. :) It was a sunny day in St. Petersburg, Florida, ...

I agree with Zig. It was crammed and just didn't feel connected to us. Along with that, it just didn't feel complete. I think putting more into this and giving ...

To me, this doesn't work as well as a poem as it would as lyrics. I think that the words just work better that way, and would sound better if ...

Well, I think the reviewer had most of my questions/things I didn't understand; really, I just want to know why he's got all this anger kind of bottled up in ...

To answer your questions, I have no clue where this is going but I'm excited to find out. And yes, the description's great - 30 degrees and snowing here and ...

Thanks for reviewing the 2nd chapter of my novel. Now to return the favor. :) Okay, so the biggest point in improving this is description. Everyone's voice is different, but ...

Haha, I really like this. It's simple but at the same time it holds a clever wit, which is what makes it work so well. There were some really smart ...

Thanks for reviewing my story! And now, why not return the favor? Well I thought this was a pretty good beginning. But you have no idea how much the lack ...

Probably, probably, it was all making her head hurt. She kicked the door closed. It didn't have the same effect as it would have if it had been wide open. ...

Obviously you've gotten just about million replies to this, so I doubt there's anything else I could really add. Do you think I could put this poem into one of ...

“What you see and what is there Could be split upon a hair. I can see what you can not; I can see when you will rot. Seem a little ...