StoryWeaver13

Hey, you reviewed something I wrote a few days ago I do believe! Thank you, and here to return the favor . ;)Anyway... When Veritas said "terribly well-written," it couldn't ...

Unimpressive, some may go as far as to say disgusting; scum on the belly of an Above Sea whale, or maybe a rotten tooth that still clung stubbornly to a ...

I thought this was pretty good, I'm all for that girls-don't-need-to-be-in-a-relationship-to-be-happy stuff. I really liked these lines: I'm strong enough to stand on my own two feet, and I'm strong ...

I thought this was definitely a good poem, the way you wrote it flowed really well and definitely had a sharp mental image. There was only one thing I'd change: ...

Wow, this definitely felt powerful to me. I'm not a religious person, either, I'm not even sure what religion I can fairly belong to. I just felt like you portrayed ...

Cautiously, attentively, I listen. Are they asleep? My ears catch the muffled, gentle sounds of snoring. Yes, they are. Anxiously, I mince past them and proceed down the hallway. If ...

This was pretty good, but I just got the feeling that something was lacking here. It was solid start to finish, but I just didn't feel anything from it particularly. ...

The rehearsal date had already come , and the church members were bouncing in their seats , as they drove through the city. Madison looked back at her choir, kneeling ...

Overall I thought this was pretty good, so here's just a couple of things: The first thing is that the first verse, every line starts with "This is goodbye to..." ...

The first reviewer did a really good job of picking out what little there was to fix about this piece, so overall there isn't much I can say except that ...

This was kind of an interesting poem, though I do think it could be improved with minor tweaks here and there. In general, though, I found this really interesting and ...

Whoa, I really liked this. It had a loose flowing rhythm and for once I liked the lack of punctuation, which kind of emphasized it. The voice and style are ...

I did definitely like your descriptions, but I actually kind of didn't like the fact that it was the same kind of rhyme over and over (ie. rhyming with light ...

I suppose there are places where this could be critiqued, but I don't feel like there's anything that really jumped out at me and it honestly looks fine as-is. In ...

Wow, I felt like this was really personal, yet you definitely had a mature outlook on it too. Which is hard to do in situations like these. I definitely know ...