StoryWeaver13

Hey psudiname. :D This was definitely an interesting start, and I'm itching to read the next chapter if you decide to continue. My one thought that gives me an edge ...

Hey, you reviewed something I wrote a few days ago I do believe! Thank you, and here to return the favor . ;)Anyway... When Veritas said "terribly well-written," it couldn't ...

Unimpressive, some may go as far as to say disgusting; scum on the belly of an Above Sea whale, or maybe a rotten tooth that still clung stubbornly to a ...

I thought this was pretty good, I'm all for that girls-don't-need-to-be-in-a-relationship-to-be-happy stuff. I really liked these lines: I'm strong enough to stand on my own two feet, and I'm strong ...

I thought this was definitely a good poem, the way you wrote it flowed really well and definitely had a sharp mental image. There was only one thing I'd change: ...

Wow, this definitely felt powerful to me. I'm not a religious person, either, I'm not even sure what religion I can fairly belong to. I just felt like you portrayed ...

Cautiously, attentively, I listen. Are they asleep? My ears catch the muffled, gentle sounds of snoring. Yes, they are. Anxiously, I mince past them and proceed down the hallway. If ...

This was pretty good, but I just got the feeling that something was lacking here. It was solid start to finish, but I just didn't feel anything from it particularly. ...

The rehearsal date had already come , and the church members were bouncing in their seats , as they drove through the city. Madison looked back at her choir, kneeling ...

Overall I thought this was pretty good, so here's just a couple of things: The first thing is that the first verse, every line starts with "This is goodbye to..." ...

The first reviewer did a really good job of picking out what little there was to fix about this piece, so overall there isn't much I can say except that ...

This was kind of an interesting poem, though I do think it could be improved with minor tweaks here and there. In general, though, I found this really interesting and ...

Whoa, I really liked this. It had a loose flowing rhythm and for once I liked the lack of punctuation, which kind of emphasized it. The voice and style are ...

I did definitely like your descriptions, but I actually kind of didn't like the fact that it was the same kind of rhyme over and over (ie. rhyming with light ...

I suppose there are places where this could be critiqued, but I don't feel like there's anything that really jumped out at me and it honestly looks fine as-is. In ...