Storm_Bringer

I'm back!! Sorry about that... So, back to the nitpicks... Matt’s going out, again” I replied, Comma after again. That link I gave you will help your punctuation with people ...

Oh, yeah, Renn is a girl... I think either Thunder_Dude made a mistake or just a typo. Sorry for the confusion. ^__^

Thanks everyone for their reviews! ^_^ ~Poem: I'll be working on those repetitive words. I really never noticed them. ^^ ~Meadow: Tenses... Well, I'm glad to be doing better. Hopefully ...

Thanks everybody. I'll edit it right now! but the first chapter gave me the image of a campsite. Then all of a sudden there is a library, it threw me ...

Hello again! Answers to your questions... Can you tell me more about how the characters were boring, what you would rather read about in terms of interesting characters, etc.? Pretty ...

I said: well, alot of people buy crack cocaine, but that's certainly not a good thing. Haha. Good one!!!

Beastly by Alex Flinn. It's a kind of modern Beauty and the Beast.

Umm, a good book is the Bloodline series by Kate Cary. The second one is better in my opinion. Hope you like it.

Hello! Back again! :D Hmmm. Well, I'm not sure. If you see it correctly in preview it should be the same... Did you copy and paste it or write it ...

Thanks everybody. I edited it once again. Ugh... Those tenses are really getting to me. Anyways Chapter 2 is almost done I'll be posting it soon. :D

Sorry. I posted twice.

The Hunger Games! (Suzanne Collins) Maximum Ride~ (James patterson) Vampirates! Justin Somper (doesn't have much romance but its still pretty good) The Naming Yeah. Hope you like them. ~Storm

Wow. This was a great poem. I loved the rhythm and the word choices. Its super pretty, especially with the theme of music to it. Gold Star! ~Storm

Thanks Everybody for their comments! They are very much appreciated!!!!! I'm editing this, all the tenses are messed up i know. And I'm also almost done with the second chapter! ...

Thanks MeadowLark! I didn't know that about the people speaking thing. Thanks. Sorry about the tenses. I wasn't sure which one to use. _Storm_Bringer