Storm_Bringer

Wahh!!!! I'm sorry! I did a super long post and then when I submitted it there was a problem!!! So now it's deleted and I have to do it all ...

Hey, thanks for posting in my thread! So here I am! ^___^ Okay... So, StarWars... Uh, I don't watch TV much so I've only seen a few so I might ...

Hey! Thanks for posting in my thread! :) So here it goes: Nitpicks may not change your mind……… You only need three. They do the job. :D This goes for ...

Hello! Here to review. Thanks for posting on my thread, and sorry It's been a while. The people above probably caught all the nitpicks so I'll just do an overall ...

Hi!!! Poem, I haven't talked to you for AGES!!! Well, I'm back! (Somewhat anyways) :D Here goes your review. Sorry if I'm a bit rusty... No nitpicks for me, the ...

Hey MEep! ... Well, it's as good as ever, although I hate those cliffhangers. >.< So there's more to Helen than it seems, eh? I think Melody is still the ...

Hiya KJ!!!!!! Thanks for the PM!! Wow! The story is really good so far! I'm a little disappointed that there was nothing about the experiments in this chapter but this ...

Hello. I got the PM, so I'll review your story today! :) First thing: A little tip, Dialogue Punctuation It's a common mistake... I'll give you a link that helps ...

Hey, Welcome to YWS! Thanks for posting in my thread, and sorry I took so long. I haven't been on YWS for a while. Hmm, okay so you said to ...

Hey Doodle~ I liked this story, it was very interesting. I especially like the "No talking" girl. That's not something you hear about everyday! (I liked it!) :P Well, Nitpicks ...

Hello KJ, Wow. This was really interesting. I liked it a lot!! Hmmm, Angel pretty much got all the nitpiicks so I'll just do my comments. This sort of reminded ...

Hello, Thanks for posting on my thread. Okay, so first nitpicks. I can’t believe you won! I think you should change it to I not you. It was a bit ...

Hello again! Well, I'm glad to see this chapter longer. Please do two reviews. Please, you should have done 4 already because of your two story posts. Go to the ...

Hiya! Welcome to YWS!!! Please do two reviews for every story you post. That way things get reviewed and forums don't get really crowded. Nitpick! I think there is only ...

Hello! Wow. This is long... Anyways nitpicks first! Nitpicks!!! his Grandfather’s Grandfather's should be grandfather's. It is only capitalized if it doesn't have a his (or something like that) befo