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Thank you very much, Matt! If you're interested, check out Triss: A Tale from Redwall by Brian Jacques.

He he, Mica is empathic. I shall put more of this in later.

Thank you! I'll take your advice to heart.

Than you all! As a matter of fact, I do have some more. I'll post it in a minute.

I always wondered about the lyrics to "Deeper Well."

Nitpick! I'm a mutant freak failure. Max never, EVER refers to herself as a failure!

The Wheel of Time series. I kept plugging away and finally read book four The Shadow Rising. Thing is... the characters don't do much changing.

Uh... let's see. 1) Guardians of Ga'Hoole by Kathryn Lasky 2) The Mistmantle Chronicles by M.I. McAllister 3) Auralia's Colors by Jeffery Overstreet

"What is possible is subjective." Brom from Eragon

All right. First thing, the narration sounds exactly like Max. Very good job! And second, could you please post the chapters as separate threads? I cannot read anything this long ...

By gum, a good poem. I can't really comment but this was excellent.+

Sis... how is it that you always end up using my character names? I mean... I actually wrote a story titled "Tara." Or tried to. *sigh* I really, really need ...

Really? I have three cats as well.

Since this is and action scene, you could try using short sentences or even sentence fragments. I'm just saying.

Thank you all.