Stori

Hello, Stori here to point out a few small errors. Recuperation after a flashback depended on how big the impact on her both emotionally and physically. It could just be ...

The Captain of the police was surprisingly easy to trick. As "captain" isn't being used in a title here, I don't think it needs to be capitalized. A side note- ...

Wow, what an introduction. That said, it could be better. To that end, let's get this review started. I will tell you about th places of my world, the only ...

Hello there, Stormcrow. Let me start this review by saying that this is first example I've seen of the "king's uncle" plot in a science-fiction setting. The stars, tiny splatters ...

Interesting- especially how you state that "Goodbye" is the first thing the friend said to your narrator. Were they in a hurry at the time? As far as I know, ...

Bravo! You've managed to convey the plight of the TV addict very well here. (I know; I've been there a few times). There are a couple of errors in the ...

Hello; I'm Stori, here to review your work. Usually it was very difficult for Vanessa to see in the dark but the streets of New York were so illuminated, it ...

First of all, Tulip, this poem is very powerful. Well done. Life and Death Now and After Pain and Silence Fire and Ice Fluff and Clouds Blood and Gore Peace ...

Hello there, Buggie. I'm Stori, and I shall review your work. Dianne’s shoes clicked endlessly on the cobblestones. Her red-brown hair swished behind her, smooth as a fox’s tail, and ...

Hello there, Buggie. I'm Stori, and I shall review your work. Dianne’s shoes clicked endlessly on the cobblestones. Her red-brown hair swished behind her, smooth as a fox’s tail, and ...

Too much too fast. Slow down and take a few minutes to describe the princess, the prince, the garden (or is it a forest?) and so on. He is spoiled ...

Well... obviously I should read the first part. ;) Regardless, I'll review to the best of my ability. Maria’s stomach let out a high pitch whine. I think it should ...

Hello, Half! Do you mind if I make a few suggestions? I opened one eye. Morning came too early. I yawned and sat up in my bed. For a moment, ...

It seems Dude and Vyper have covered most of the salient points here, so I'll just point out a couple things. %u201CThere%u2019s a different way in, Gibraltar,%u201D Erick said, retrieving ...

It looks like you have a good premise here. Please allow me to point out some small errors. I looked out across the bay towards the two identical towers. Each ...