StoneHeart

Okay, so just a quick comment here, it appears that you have a bug on this piece, everything is all meshed up together - I've seen it before! I'm reporting ...

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XD I know this very well. Thnx.

That's gotta be the biggest reply I've ever gotten for a review! Thanks. Anyway, my point about keeping a focal character still holds I'm afraid. You can make your readers ...

Hmmm, I'd have betted (Half an hour ago) that you two where the same. Well, you're welcome anyway.

Ya see how much your writing's improved :P

Wow! Thanks. . . . I never've really been any good at poetry! But I appreciate muchly this comment!

I agree with Magnus. If you don't have a spell checker you can always use Google's one.

Hey 'Renee'. Just a quick hint on reviews, you ought to really pay more attention to the general idea instead of details that small (Just a note - no hate!) ...

Is this some kind of test?

Impressive.

Okay, if this is a quick description of love at first sight, then it was great. If it was a prologue-for-a-book type deal, then I'm afraid to say you need ...

Hey, hey! No problem. Thanks, I'm always glad to hear an opinion on my stories from a reader! It's great. Sorry, this isn't quite top-notch yet :P But I'm working ...

Thanks! Very useful review here. Just so you know, this was a very,very,very quick first draft that, I admit, needs a massive amount of work. Dog's didn't give me much ...