StoneHeart

Cricket down here noticed the description issue, I can see. Get back to me on my suggestion, please!

Also, if you want some more reviews, just let me know (okay?).

I will agree that he was amzing

Sorry about the review size >.> This review's as big as your entire piece. My bad.

. . . You're excused.

. . . I didn't mean to 'bash' you. But I warned you, I'm here to tear.

XD Shea. Gray and grey are both the same word -they mean the same thing. Check your spell checker/ a dictionary.

Also, watch it. You're getting close to sending your story to cliche land with your style of writing old-time-style. Remember: If your character's are in another world, why shouldn't they ...

lol, okay this was amusing. One nitpick though. Gollum would have said 'fishesss' and not 'fish' :P He didn't really seem to get the whole 'plural' thing down, and always ...

Ahha! Very good. Just what I wanted to hear. :D Thanks for the feedback!

Your spelling and capitalization are actually pretty good . . . *is having trouble complimenting this piece. -_-

That must've been it. . . . I do ^^

Ouch.

Meh, use -_-

WHAT?!?!?! I swear I reviewed this piece AGES ago! O.o . . . but it's different now. Good improvements.