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Re: De Frog Wizard
Wow, I thought the other one was nonsense! This is amazingly nonsensical! So many new words I am overwhelmed! It's beautiful! I feel so mooshy all of a sudden! That ...
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Re: My Name Is Polly
This is what I call a nonsense poem. Total nonsense, but quite amusing, a good children's poem. However I'm not sure if kerfuffle is a word. . . . not ...
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Re: A Risk Worth Taking
You could of course argue that it was a waste of life. The Germans in the world wars were human, you must remember that, not all of them were bad ...
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Re: The Three Vengeful Dwarves
Nice nice nice! I enjoyed! For some reason I went looking for something of yours to review when in need! Two wrong don't make a right, but really, there are ...
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Re: Love chapter 4
I never knew you were quite so good at writing! This was frankly, quite good! I enjoyed it, it read easily! I would say that it isn't original, but for ...
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Re: That Boy: Part 3
Ohkay! Good work here, sadly it isn't original and I read stories like this all the time, but it was well written and interesting (That counts for a lot!) Grammar: ...
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Re: Chapter 2
Okay this was great! I really enjoyed it, t'was enthralling. However I'm beginning to think it might be more appropriate to give this story the categories of "Fantasy Romance" from ...
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Re: A Nation Grows Large and Still Collapses
Okay, interesting poem here! It was well written, and had a lot of really good words, nice powerful words. Dying, vacant, blood, sorrows, pickled corpses . . . but it ...
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Re: Ch 3 - The City of Lonka
Hmmm, okay, great work! Huzzah, double thumbs up! Whatever you need! I really enjoyed this, it was well written and well paced, and most importantly it was original! And to ...
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Re: Chapter 1
Okay so this was very well written, nice job! Personally I've never been to a funeral, but I know how it is to lose a parent (Father in my case ...
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Re: Introduction
Okay, great work here. I've read a number of stories like this one, and they're really actually quite good in my opinion, however be careful. You can get logic holes ...
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Re: Plight of a Widow
Okay, this portrayed the regret of suicide very well. When peoples lives fall apart and they plan to commit suicide they A: Jump off the bridge and find on the ...
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Re: Robot Colony
Interesting. . . . BWAHAHAHAHAHAH This is crazy, but I can see where you're coming from. Personally I don't use iPhones, iPods, computers and the like much, so I am ...
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Re: Abyss of Madness
Wow, this was amazing, your word choice was beautiful, filled with emotion, each one dealing a punch! I wish I could write like this! It's a real struggle for me ...
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Re: Lights: Chapter One *Edited and Revised*
Okay, so first off, this is one VERY weird world, and that is one very weird fourteen year old. A world were 14 year old's can go to war? Okay, ...
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