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Woah... Your writing style is so unique! Keep that up! Um...I'm reviewing this because you wanted people to because you might be entering it in a contest (right?). I personally ...

Ok, I'm going to start by saying that I'm not that into poetry and I have always had a hard time understanding it...sooo, this review will probably be short and ...

Hey, great job! This is a perfect first chapter. Descriptive enough for it to make sense (which is sometimes hard for a first chapter), short enough and interesting enough to ...

Great job. Once again you have amazed me. (I'm sure you're almost tired of hearing that from me :) ). This is a great second chapter and it matches style ...

Woah. Just woah. I know this is a couple months old (partially because I wrote a childhood essay at the same time that you did and partially because I saw ...

WOAH! Great job!! This is super saaaaad :( I LOVE it!! Great job with description! I felt like I was there with them. I don't know what else to say ...

OH MY GOODNESS!!! I think that this short little preview is one of my favorite writings of yours that I've read!!! It's so good and it makes me want to ...

Once again, you amaze me! I loved that I could feel the nervous energy coming from Fox throughout this chapter! I also loved the tension you wrote into this chapter ...

Abby! This was written VERY well! I'm amazed at how good you are at keeping the attention of readers. When you asked about a review I thought 'I'll try, but ...