Stellabeam

Is this for a school report? I hope this review doesn't come too late. Your essay is interesting overall but there are some aspects that could use improving. I notice ...

Bravo! This is amazing! Maybe someone more experienced with poetry can give a more expert idea, but I think it's great. Only thing I can tell you is to maybe ...

It looks like you have a great story rolling unraveling here. I just have a couple comments/suggestions to help improve it even more. “The next five minute seems so surreal; ...

Great poem!!! I can really relate to this poem in so many different ways. My favorite line is " But now you just ignore me." It's final, abrupt and simple. ...

I want more! I want more! You should keep on writing this story! I am pumped! You got me at a cliffhanger. What happens to Darian Felicion(ooh sounds like Dracon ...

I really like your remake of Cinderella ( if that's what you're trying to do , that's how I read it). Your piece puts us the pain she went through ...

Bravo!! I loved it!! I'm starting to write suspense type stuff and this is better than what I've done so far. This reminded me of several different things like the ...