StealTheWorld

Hey! The bulky part is the character speaking. Then the last line occurs when she's done. It's just him/her telling the audience what's happening to her, then being applauded for ...

Hey there! Thanks for reading, reviewing, etc. it means a lot :) I'll clarify a few things for you: The character is using the open microphone to tell everyone what's ...

She's supposed to be talking to a therapist, but I know it's hard to see that :) thank you for reading and reviewing!

Wow. I couldn't form a coherent thought for a while.

Thanks you so much!

Of course I'll take your comments into consideration! :0 if I want to improve, I need to do so. I understand where you're coming from, but what do you mean ...

Wow. Thanks!!

The last stanza meant that this so-called "King" wouldn't rule over those people forever. They'll find someone right for them, someday. The King represents someone who plays with hearts and ...

This was hilarious. Absolutely hilarious. "If you has the hype, you has the hamburger."

You've got the gist of it, but it think I can explain a bit more :) The character I created is, in fact, artificial. By no means does she stick ...

The last line relates to something I heard a while back about people losing themselves when they succumb to certain falsities. I didn't think there was a need to draw ...

Thanks for pointing that out! I meant senryu :]

Thank you!! It's all much appreciated :)

It was meant to start out light and fluffy (and cheesy) before dulling into something a bit more...realistic. Thank you for the review!

Thanks :)