StealTheWorld

Then what IS it about? o.o

That's alright :) It's not too overwhelmingly repetitive, so don't worry about it!

Wow. Thanks and have an awesometastic day :D

That's exactly what I aimed for with the structuring :D I'll edit soon and post the revisions. Thanks a billion!

Gah! The image refuses to look any clearer. I had to screenshot (screenshoot? :p) the poem because YWS wouldn't cooperate with my formatting. I'll fix the impact part :) thx ...

Thanks

I know >.< It took me forever to get the formatting right and it still isn't exactly how I wanted it. I'll fix it soon. I love your idea about ...

Wow. The impact of the last stanza was so very quick and hard-hitting. I didn't expect it at all. It's so very sad in all the best ways. It seems ...

Thanks for explaining! You, dear, are quite skilled in the art of metaphors ;) very talented indeed. Great job!

Hey there, Ahmed. I'd just like to help with your review a bit, so sit tight. I know there's a review guide on the site somewhere but I can't remember ...

Holy wowww. You're too nice :) :D thank you thank you! have a fantastical day.

Oh! Okay :) that makes sense. Thanks and have an absolutely fantastic day!

My biggest problem with longer works is the commitment. I write in fragments, as shown above, so it would take a lot for me to keep going back to add ...

Oh my, that's fantastic :) your review made me smile manically. Congrats and thank you thank you thank you!

I only incorporated the idea of loneliness into the poem, so you're not missing much by not reading the book! (But you really should, it was fantastic) I was actually ...