StealTheWorld

Hey there :) hope you don't mind a late review on this. Let's see... The word "War" is capitalized. What's the significance behind that? Is it referring to war in ...

Wow. This was one of the best short stories (if not the best) I've read in a long time. Emotional, but not overwhelming with sob stories and tears and whatnot. ...

Wow. This was wonderful. I absolutely loved how you portrayed a side of Mary that many never even considered. I caught on fairly quickly, but the way you dropped larger ...

Hey there :) so, I was a bit hesitant to read this at first because I was a newly-rehabilitated depression-kicker and I didn't want to put myself in the position ...

This was extremely entertaining. Great idea! I like the way you used the same formatting as the song (and let's be honest. I've been singing this song for days now.) ...

Hey there! Well, this was really well-written. I was afraid it would turn out to be one of the more cliche poems, but it wasn't. Definitely not. The rhythm was ...

I really like the theme and the way you used natural disasters to describe things. This was different. Good different. - Verse 4, Line 4: the rhythm seems a bit ...

This was deep, dramatic, and so very emotional. I wanted to cry for the character. You described the internal battle very VERY well, indeed. I commend you for that :) ...

Smells like death, eh? I can't figure out where I heard that from before...oh well. Anyways. This was deep and very well written. The progression of the bodies and heir ...

This contained such vivid imagery. I loved it! "To the world and its humanity"

1. "This entire house screams for you" - ABSOLUTE PERFECTION. Don't change that line. EVER. 2. The wording and imagery was amazing. I can see just how much her departure ...

This reminded me so much of "Who's On First?" If you haven't read it yet, I highly encourage you to. It's one of the best dialogues I've ever seen :D ...

Hey there!! So, first off this is a topic I haven't read about it a while. I liked reading about this person's views on the asylum. However, I feel that ...

Oh my...another terribly idiotic challenge. I've never heard of it, but I'm sure that wouldn't be for long. I like the easy dialogue here. It's simple but effective. And the ...

This was extremely short. But I don't mind, of course, because short poems bite :P Personally, I love the repetition. It made the last word in each line more prominent ...