StarDuster

Like everyone else has said: Welcome!!! This is a great site. Anyway.. this is a really good poem. Really really good. The words you chose are perfect and flow so ...

I always like to see what comes out of a person's mind when they just sit down and write. It's fascinating to see our thoughts form into words on paper, ...

I agree that this has a choppy rhyming scheme and too much punctuation...poetry really doesn't need so much punctuation. It's unnecessary. The rhyme isn't forced, but it does make it ...

I really liked this. It's a really amazing poem. i think I will just take it the easy way and say I do kinda agree with what everyone else said ...

Again, these are great. Very oddly entertaining, actually, to read about people dying. haha. How morbid humans are. OK so here we go: some grammar again... Story #2 Totes was ...

This is really great. I like the idea, it's interesting. I guess we are all fascinated by death as authors, are we not? :wink: Well, I just noticed a few ...

Hi there Mackenzie! Wow! This is really amazing! I love the idea of a spirit, being able to move from one thing to the next and feel its pain. Maybe ...

I thought this flowed nicely and led to the next stanza nicely. The rhymes were good, too. I think that it is a little confusing to the reader, though, because ...

Wow. This was really good. Very deep and sad.. :( I liked the first one better, actually. I don't know why, I just did. Plus, I really liked that ending ...

I didn't bother to check out what other people said, like I tend to do. This awed me so much that I didn't want anyone else to ruin it for ...

You asked me to honestly review your poems, so I came to check them out... This happened to be the first one I read. While there may be some things ...

Wow. Didn't know you could write like that (that's a compliment by the way). How come you've never showed me anything like this before? Although you probably won't take anything ...

I loved this! It was so great and descriptive! I can't think of anything that you should fix (that hasn't already been mentioned).. sorry I'm not much of a help. ...

Wow. This was really good. I like the chapters where you're going back to the past more, because they describe the character more, when she was happy. Thanks for letting ...

I really liked this chapter. It was good and definitely explains the trouble that some rumors make for people, whether they're true or not. It's no fun to be left ...