Squirrel

Thank you i will change shadow to shadows

Thank you. I will add some punctuation.

thank you I will work more on this

I like it so far. You need commas in some places but other than that, I like it.

That's ok if you don't agree. You did a great job though. well done buddy

Thank you so much. This is very helpful. I like when people tell me how I can make my writing better so thank you.

Wow I really like this. All I have to say is you forgot to capitalize the A in line 8. Other than that, this is fantastic. We all go through ...

I like the poem but I think there is something you should fix. Always capitalize an I when you are referring to yourself. You had a good choice in words ...