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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Crystal Chronicles: Sapphire

    Hey there kiwiauthor_13. Remember me? I was the guy that PM'ed you lol. Ever since “IT” happened, I have purposely separated myself from all other human contact, physical or verbal. ...

    Dec 11, 2008
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Innocently Guilty

    Hey Kaylyn. Branches whipped her face, arms, and legs as she ran blindly. The woods were a blur of greens, browns, and blacks. Are you able to integrate these two ...

    Dec 11, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Figment II

    Hey there cherylkate, and welcome to YWS. Naughty girl for trying to flunk your semester :wink: What little air there is between us is warm but not stifling – the ...

    Dec 10, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Unspoken Words - Chapter one

    Hey there googly. Once the last bell rang I was at my car, pulling out my keys immediately. What bell are we talking about here? Be more specific. I didn't ...

    Dec 10, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Rachel

    Hey there KailaMarie. Rachel was adorable. She was the cutest girl I'd ever seen in my entire life. Can you provide an example where Rachel was cute or adorable? We ...

    Dec 10, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Untitled - Ch.1 Part Two

    Hey Vivi. Silver rain slunk icily down the foggy square windows of the bus. Both Marshel and I new that this was not my stop, but he new I was ...

    Dec 10, 2008
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Glass eyes and Ghosts

    Hey again archer123. Anna sat teary eyed and starred out at the flat landscape. Her grandfather had died and depression hit her like a hammer. These two ideas should link ...

    Dec 10, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Lonely Bones

    Hey Pingu, what's up? How have you been lately? When I first read this poem, I had mixed feelings about it. I think I had somewhat enjoyed it, but didn't ...

    Dec 9, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: please delete

    Hello vox nihili. The bitter wind was edged in ice, stinging like the talons of a raptor; the slate stratus clouds an omen of the torrents that would soon slice ...

    Dec 9, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Zipper of Your Pants part 3

    Hehe. Your turn Chey. I tore my eyes off the steaming platters of food, smiling nervously at the woman dishing. Woman dishing? I glanced at Sara nervously, to see her ...

    Dec 8, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Faded- Prologue

    Hello turity, and welcome to YWS. It was strange falling asleep after eighteen years of sleepless nights. I find eighteen years of no sleep to be highly unrealistic. A person ...

    Dec 8, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Killing Butterflies: a tragedy [2]

    Hey JC, I'm back to review chapter 1. The familiar atmosphere didn’t help my mood; instead it reminded me that John was normally here too, with his arm around me ...

    Dec 8, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: [deleted]

    Hehe. Hey Castles. That was the thought that echoed through her head as she stood upon the hilltop, the dry-gold grass whispering against her calves as she looked out to ...

    Dec 8, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Prologue of my story

    Hey there Haruno Sakura. You shouldn't be so nervous when posting works on the site. People are trying to help you out to improve your writing abilities. You will not ...

    Dec 7, 2008
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Guardian

    Hey there Ha6647, and welcome to YWS. From behind the moving creature a loud crack echoed through the forest depths, the sound could have been mistaken for a peal of ...

    Dec 7, 2008


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