Squall

Hey there Mandeyy. My name's Squall and I'm one of the instructors on YWS. Overall impressions: I think a big problem with the piece is that a lot of it ...

Hey there Foxfire. I'll be keeping this short as I have several other things to do. Overall impressions: I felt that some parts of the piece felt reductant whereas there ...

Hey there Roon. My name is Squall and I'm one of the instructors on YWS. I'll be your reviewer today. As the shadowy figure stole down the bleak alleyway, fleeting ...

Hey there christine. Not two months have I been working here as the kings' right-hand-man. Well, woman, and people already trust me with their lives! Two months ago my life ...

Hey there Whispers, and welcome to YWS. My name is Squall and I'm one of the instructors on YWS. I personally have watched some anime before so I can see ...

Hey Angels. Suspending our mission meant failure, and failure here meant death. I quite like how you've used the rain to establish a depressing yet urgent sort of mood. It ...

Hey Karmas. A review above has dealt with grammar issues. Here, I'll be looking at your piece on the whole. Her worn dress pushing against my spirit and her bronze ...

Hello Lily. Don’t. That’s what they always told her. Don’t speak back to your elders; it’s disrespectful. Don’t play roughly with the boys; it’s unladylike. Don’t talk so loudly in ...

Hey there JayandKay. You had a very interesting first paragraph that managed to hook my attention and made me want to read on. However, as I continued reading this, I ...

Hey there lordgluzman. Just to let you know that I have no idea as to how to review lyrics, so this critique might of be a little useless. Still, I'll ...

Hey there Enigmatic_Penguin, it's been a while. I'm not going to be too detailed with this critique, but I think I should give you the main issues that I have ...

Hey there Rosey. Round 2. This time, I'm not going to give a line by line as it isn't going to help much this time. First off, I would like ...

Hello Rosey Unicorn. Thanks for PMing me for a review. Sorry if I was a bit late at this. Nit-picks: The rock grated and screeched, threatening to cave in the ...

Hey there Olivia. It's been a while. Well I haven't exactly reviewed in a while, but I'll do my best. On the whole, I think this works well as a ...

Hey Ellen. I won't be real specific and detailed here as I feel real tired lately from staying up all night and playing video games :lol: . Just gonna give ...