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Hi Blue! I like the way you began this, the images of photographs and cursive are lovely. I like the flow, that was great. There are a few places with ...

Hello! I'm SporkPunk, and I'll add on to these reviews. Hopefully. First, stanzas! They're wonderful little things. You have what I like to call a "Wall-O-Text" and it's truly daunting ...

Hey Thee, I'll be upfront. This isn't very good. It's rather sloppy, to be honest. There is a subtle yet vital difference between your and you're, which you seem to ...

Don't tell your reader how to interpret your poem! That spoils it. Oh, and hello. :) Anyway, I actually like how the beginning works, but the third line of your ...

Hi there Romanceotaku. SporkPunk here, and I'll be reviewing this today. First off, the rhyming doesn't really work for me. Without a rhyme scheme to go with it, the rhyme ...

Blackbird, First off, your poetry is brilliant. I read the older version, but I don't remember if I reviewed. This is such an improvement. I know it's not helpful, but ...

Hi there! SporkPunk here to review! This was really good. I like how you turned a mundane assignment into something great. You make the rhyme schem work, and the flow ...

Hi sillyducky! I'm SporkPunk, and I'll be reviewing this! I know I'm really late on this, but I kept forgetting to review it after I saw it. It's awesome, brilliant, ...

Hi jDawn! I'm SporkPunk, and I'll review this today. :) Okay, so the other reviewers seem to have gotten most of the critiquing points. I'll just comment on what I ...

Hi Elinor! SporkPunk here. This poem doesn't quite convey much of anything poetic. It reads much like prose, and nothing is realized, or gained from it. It's very safe. You ...

Hi kaiden! I really like this. I've always liked semi-stream-of-consciousness pieces, and this is good. It has a sort of rhyme scheme, but not quite. I think this could flow ...

Hi Flame, So, this is an alright poem. It can definitely be improved upon. Jagged got most, if not all, of the points worth speaking of. I'll just reiterate about ...

Hello jemjive! :D So, I have to agree with the reviewers before me that this isn't quite original, but it isn't bad. I rather liked it. The repetition is good, ...

Hi there! I'll have a go at reviewing this today. I won't repeat what the others have said about commas and whatnot. I will suggest more spacing between paragraphs. As ...

Hi there! I'm Sporks, and I'll review this today This is such a nice little poem. I like the message it conveys. However, it was quite short. I think you ...