SporkPunk

Hey gamergirl. I'm SporkPunk and I'll be reviewing this. :] Now, I'm going to go through this and correct errors as I see them and then expound on my corrections ...

Hey there preachergirl! I'm SporkPunk and I'll be reviewing this today. :] So, first off, I thought the idea was quite good but I think it could be executed a ...

Hi there, Jace! I'm SporkPunk, and I'll be reviewing this today. I haven't read your other chapter, but after reading this I want to. :) Technical Stuff She inadvertedly played ...

Hi Delanie! I'm Sporks, and I'll be reviewing this today. This time, I will go line-by-line to address anything I see that might need...improvement. :) WHEN I LOOK AT MYSELF ...

Hiya, Meg! :D Here as requested for a review. And thanks for reviewing my chapter. :] It was really helpful. Anyway, onto your review! I had felt the need to ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! I'm Sporks and I'll be reviewing this today. Paradise beneath the heavens- The Ancient Memory: The Lord’s son, Zevro had discovered the perfect world where ...

Hey Sarah, Sporks here as requested!:) I'll point out anything as I go along. Walking to technology seemed longer today, was it because I was thinking of him? His liquid ...

Hey there, Megsug! Thanks for requesting a review. I apologize for not getting to it more quickly, I had some projects to do the past few days. But I'm here ...

Hiya, Wolfman! I kind of sort of love your username. Anyway, on to the review. First, I really liked this. I haven't read the first part (there is one, right? ...

Hey there, Retro! :] Random red runs are scattered across my arm. Some see it as a cry of help, or for attention. I was looking for escape. Ah, a ...

Hi there! :D I think this is a pretty great poem. I really liked it a lot. My only nitpick is the line "clean my boots will be." It doesn't ...

Hey there :D This was really, really ambitious. Second person, prose-y poem style, and interesting subject matter. While I admire how you tackle all of these things, I don't know ...

Hey there Be! :P I must say, overall, I like this poem. It's cute, sweet, simple. However, I have one nitpick. "They're pinky promises." ...I don't know about other readers, ...

Hi Hayden! Sporks here to review. To be honest, I'm not going to pretend to be a poetry expert, but I kind of liked the repetition used here. It kind ...

Hey there! Sporks dropping by to review. The machines she’s wired to scream her departure. This is awkward. Maybe change up the wording? ten-oh-seven pm, Generally, times are best as ...