mothers - mother's
spell out the 9 and 49. though the doc's age should be cut.
I really liked this. Simple, powerful, nice little meta piece.
I usually don't like pieces that are this short as they never give you a real chance to connect with the characters or learn their story but you gave just enough life to each individual action and character that it felt real.
Especially loved the final line.
Well done
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