SpiritedWolfe

re: Selach getting angry. I worded that question wrong xD So, yeah I remember that he got upset because Fyn was lingering too long on the one pot that was ...

Sometimes characters do what they want.

If she calls out for him to say, that would show her character in an entirely different light than if she simply followed his exit with her eyes, turning away ...

Sorry for the slow response, but thank you for the review! ^^ Also to clarify, I think it's new information that influence is given to people in Splinter, but it ...

Thanks for the review! ^^ Their last working memory is the number someone puts in their head and then they have to conform to Splinter's ways. I hope to make ...

Thank you so much for the review! I really appreciate your analysis of the chapters, since it gives me some perspectives I hadn%u2019t thought about before! :) and I%u2019m happy ...

Thank you for the review!! And yup, Splinter is definitely, solidly bad xD And yeah, as you saw in the next part, they eventually get some autonomy back after some ...

Thanks for the review! I%u2019m glad you enjoyed it overall :) I was a bit nervous about this part since I didn%u2019t want it to feel too heavy or dark ...

Yeah, I don't think I explained the whole meeting part super well. Honestly just think I didn't write the dialogue super well, because it was supposed to be more like ...

Belated thank you for the review

it would look like the Spider-Man pointing at another Spider-Man meme. yes. xD

Hey! I'm rereading some of my reviews for some editing points points, and I wanted to clarify that the rattling was just William knocking/pounding on Rachel's door, and it's a ...

Thank you for the review! A couple of other people have also mentioned being a bit confused with all the masks, so I've got some editing to do there. I ...

Ahh but is it really taking it away if they walk willingly towards the firelight? :PP

Glad it was helpful! And I think my point about the scene was more specifically about the detail of how they worked on Jerica, from pulling out the arrow, the ...