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Re: Wind Chimes
Hello, Mama Writer, your adoptive daughter, Wolf, here to give a more punctual review :3 I'll show you how it's done Let's get to it, shall we? First off nitpicks: ...
Jul 26, 2014 -
Re: Finny: 3
Hello, Elfsongs, Wolf here for a review. Once again, I'll start with nitpicks: Ezra nodded and shrugged with a crooked grin. He never had a sibling before. Be very careful ...
Jul 25, 2014 -
Re: Finny: 2
Hello again, Elfsongs, Wolf here for a review of your lovely work. First off, a few nitpicks: He I felt lightheaded thinking about it, but I made myself look away, ...
Jul 25, 2014 -
Re: Finny
Hello, Elfsongs, Wolf here for a review. So a lot of stuff that I agree on was pointed out by Moriah Leila, so this review may be slightly shorter in ...
Jul 24, 2014 -
Re: Monachopsis, Chapter One: Children Yet, the Tale to Hear (Part Three)
Hello WindRattles, Wolf here for another review for your lovely work. Whoa, this definitely was a long chapter, and I see why you split it up into parts. However, I ...
Jul 24, 2014 -
Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 18.
Hello Raven, Wolf here for a review. Congratulations on finally reaching 15k! That's no easy feat, so keep up the pace :D Alright, so I'm already two sentences in and ...
Jul 23, 2014 -
Re: Monachopsis, Chapter One: Children Yet, the Tale to Hear (Part Two)
Hello again, WindRattle, Wolf here for another review. Sorry I'm so late with this, my laziness has been going up recently. Let's dive right into this piece, shall we? I ...
Jul 23, 2014 -
Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 17.
Hello Raven, Wolf here for a review. Few nitpicks: Will you please eat you please your hotdog? I think you can tell what's wrong here. She hated eating hot dogs, ...
Jul 22, 2014 -
Re: Monachopsis, Chapter One: Children Yet, the Tale to Hear (Part One)
Hello WindRattles, Wolf here for a requested review. This was really good and I loved this. Seriously, this idea was really interesting, and once I really got into it, I ...
Jul 21, 2014 -
Re: Ronenzel32 - Britoniah's Gate
Hello Ronenzel, Wolf here for a review. Okay, first off, this is waaaaay too long. This entire part is over One Hundred Thousand words long, and your first chapter alone ...
Jul 19, 2014 -
Re: The Last Breath of Fire, Chapter 7
Hello Zont, Wolf here for a review. A month, really? To be honest, this isn't that spectacular, but I still liked it dont get me wrong. It just seems too ...
Jul 19, 2014 -
Re: Misery or Humanity, Chapters 4 & 5
Hello Rocket, Wolf here for a review. So, since there are two chapters here, I'm going to split up the review between the chapters, and as soon as I finish ...
Jul 18, 2014 -
Re: What I Thought Warmth Was
Hello Michelle, Wolf here for a review. First, I talk about some technical things, then I'll dive into the content and some stylistic things. So overall, I liked the concept. ...
Jul 17, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 16 Part 2
Hello Noelle, Wolf here for a very hate filled review. Now, as you probably know, I am very broken. The first have destroyed my feelings, and the only reason I ...
Jul 16, 2014 -
Re: Ignis ch2
Hello Kathryn, Wolf here for another review. So, I'm afraid this has to happen. I know a huge issue people have is commas and where to or not to put ...
Jul 15, 2014