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SpiritedWolfe

and i kept walking, even if my feet were too tired to hold me up anymore

  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: Percy Jackson fan fic (title in works) Part 11

    Hey there! Happy Review Day ~ Let's get right into it. I appreciate you having a summary of events before your chapter, but I was a little bit confused about ...

    Sep 30, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Risen - chapter nine

    Hi there! Here to save your chapter from the Green Room ~ So, even though I don't have any prior context, I like that I'm still able to follow the ...

    Sep 30, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The demon maiden chapter nine

    Hi again, Oxana~ Happy Review Day! So keeping in mind that I haven't read every part before this, I'll still try my best to give some advice. I'm not going ...

    Sep 30, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 57.1

    Hi again, Blue! I'll get right into this. Having read the last two parts before this, I'm not entirely sure just how necessary the beginning portion of this chapter is. ...

    Sep 30, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 55

    Oh my god. I'm literally crying. Blue, why would you do this xD Goodness gracious. That was incredibly well written. I'm not even kidding that I teared up once I ...

    Sep 30, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Descendants- Chapter Three

    Hey there! Happy Review Day ~ Let's get right into it. So I really liked this part. I thought it was very well written and it kept me engaged throughout. ...

    Sep 30, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Insanity Caught Me

    Hi, there! Welcome to YWS ^^ I'd like to start off by saying I agree with everything that niteowl wrote in her review, so going back over it would be ...

    Sep 30, 2018
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: The Porcelain Thrown of Tokyo

    Hey, Redbox! Happy Review Day ~ First of all, should your title be Porcelain * Throne of Tokyo? That would make more sense to me since I'm not sure what ...

    Sep 30, 2018
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: A Postcard for Pearson

    Hi, Lavvie! I certainly don't feel qualified enough to review this, but I'll do my best to give my thoughts anyway. I loved this. Even though it was just one ...

    Sep 30, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The demon maiden chapter seven

    Hey, Oxara! Happy Review Day ~ I'm here to save your chapter from the Green Room, despite having not read previous parts, so I'll try my best ^^ Let's get ...

    Sep 30, 2018
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Personal Reflective

    Hi, Carlak! Happy Review Day ~ So, I found this a really interesting piece, and I'm glad you're comfortable enough with your past to be able to share your story. ...

    Sep 30, 2018
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Narrative Re: Momma's Boy

    Hey! Happy review day ~ Let's get right into it! Jum copied and pasted the location as told on the beat-up laptop that was strapped to way too many wires. ...

    Sep 30, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Life or Death ~Book one It Begins Chapter 10

    Hi, Shikora! Back and finally caught up ~ I just wanted to start with a quick quote that kind of threw me off. Quake spread his blood coated wings and ...

    Sep 28, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Life or Death ~Book one It Begins Chapter 9

    Hi again, Shikora! I'm back reviewing faster than last time :P So, this part was kind of difficult for me to read because there were a lot of syntax errors. ...

    Sep 28, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Life or Death ~Book one It Begins Chapter 8

    Hey again, Shikora~ ^^ Gonna start off with a cool quote: Hours past and still they flew to their death. I really liked this line! This is the kind of ...

    Sep 28, 2018


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