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Re: Percy Jackson fan fic (title in works) Part 11
Hey there! Happy Review Day ~ Let's get right into it. I appreciate you having a summary of events before your chapter, but I was a little bit confused about ...
Sep 30, 2018 -
Re: The Risen - chapter nine
Hi there! Here to save your chapter from the Green Room ~ So, even though I don't have any prior context, I like that I'm still able to follow the ...
Sep 30, 2018 -
Re: The demon maiden chapter nine
Hi again, Oxana~ Happy Review Day! So keeping in mind that I haven't read every part before this, I'll still try my best to give some advice. I'm not going ...
Sep 30, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 57.1
Hi again, Blue! I'll get right into this. Having read the last two parts before this, I'm not entirely sure just how necessary the beginning portion of this chapter is. ...
Sep 30, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 55
Oh my god. I'm literally crying. Blue, why would you do this xD Goodness gracious. That was incredibly well written. I'm not even kidding that I teared up once I ...
Sep 30, 2018 -
Re: Descendants- Chapter Three
Hey there! Happy Review Day ~ Let's get right into it. So I really liked this part. I thought it was very well written and it kept me engaged throughout. ...
Sep 30, 2018 -
Re: Insanity Caught Me
Hi, there! Welcome to YWS ^^ I'd like to start off by saying I agree with everything that niteowl wrote in her review, so going back over it would be ...
Sep 30, 2018 -
Re: The Porcelain Thrown of Tokyo
Hey, Redbox! Happy Review Day ~ First of all, should your title be Porcelain * Throne of Tokyo? That would make more sense to me since I'm not sure what ...
Sep 30, 2018 -
Re: A Postcard for Pearson
Hi, Lavvie! I certainly don't feel qualified enough to review this, but I'll do my best to give my thoughts anyway. I loved this. Even though it was just one ...
Sep 30, 2018 -
Re: The demon maiden chapter seven
Hey, Oxara! Happy Review Day ~ I'm here to save your chapter from the Green Room, despite having not read previous parts, so I'll try my best ^^ Let's get ...
Sep 30, 2018 -
Re: Personal Reflective
Hi, Carlak! Happy Review Day ~ So, I found this a really interesting piece, and I'm glad you're comfortable enough with your past to be able to share your story. ...
Sep 30, 2018 -
Re: Momma's Boy
Hey! Happy review day ~ Let's get right into it! Jum copied and pasted the location as told on the beat-up laptop that was strapped to way too many wires. ...
Sep 30, 2018 -
Re: Life or Death ~Book one It Begins Chapter 10
Hi, Shikora! Back and finally caught up ~ I just wanted to start with a quick quote that kind of threw me off. Quake spread his blood coated wings and ...
Sep 28, 2018 -
Re: Life or Death ~Book one It Begins Chapter 9
Hi again, Shikora! I'm back reviewing faster than last time :P So, this part was kind of difficult for me to read because there were a lot of syntax errors. ...
Sep 28, 2018 -
Re: Life or Death ~Book one It Begins Chapter 8
Hey again, Shikora~ ^^ Gonna start off with a cool quote: Hours past and still they flew to their death. I really liked this line! This is the kind of ...
Sep 28, 2018
