Spaulds

No problem! I am always happy to help a fellow writer! :)

Thanks for the feedback! I'll begin working on it again!

Thank you for the input! I will start working on it! I was having trouble with my dialogue and imagery, but I think It should be cleared up now. Once ...

Is this a character in a book? I don't understand. :)

no problem

Yea I noticed a bunch of those after I published it. lol

That definitely looks better, i really like this poem!

Thanks for the feedback!

Haha, I meant rock, sorry. :D

Your welcome! I'm always happy to help, and your suggestion for adding the last line on it's own sounds good! I think it would work. Nice writing!

I completely agree. This poem does feel powerful. After one or two reads I have to say this is an amazing poem!

Thanks for the review! I really wasn't happy with the poem myself, but i still didn't just want to get rid of it. I was wondering what I could do ...