Spartan118

Sorry I write when my emotions are high it's the only thing that makes it easy for me to write poems

I am feeling amazing and this is one of my older works and I'm glad you wrote this review I almost forgot about this one

Thx and we have found a middle ground and I still love her all the same and I can't imagine a day with out her cause we are destined to ...

I accept that she is a masochist it was the big surprise that got me and I have a hard time with doing stuff like that cause I'm a gentle ...

This was more of a way to vent for me cause I have a hard time trying to vent in other ways and I would rather have people see what ...

Thx for the advice and you're probably right about her hiding it and she knows how I feel already I still love her it just came as a shock to ...

I never use a co author. And it's a continuation to the next line if you don't realize that

It's a continuation to the next couple lines

Wtf is it wrong to post a love letter,in a way, on here and yea I see my mistake in the brakets

This is not poetry this is a love letter in a way but also the reasons how I fail as a boyfriend to her

The line after that is the continuation of that sentence

I will have to rework the prologue to make sense of everything and have the main character rewind the recording but that'll be chapter two or three I guess

if you do read the prologue you will find out a lot about the main character like how he's the only surviver of the Kyro at its prime and it's ...

Yea

Ok so a huge spoiler into about chapter 3, Kyro is abandoned.