SpaceSailor123

Hiii, I'm here to review your poem using ocean terms, (Sea=summary. Beach=good things. Rocks=things to improve.) Let's get started! The sea: This seems to be about a painter and a ...

Hiiii, I'm going to review your poem using ocean terms. Let's begin! The sea: So overall this seems to be about a mother worrying about her son's lack of calling. ...

Hiii, I'm here to review your poem using ocean terms. Let's begin! The sea: The poem is about...well, a ballerina. We are viewing this poem from the perspective of an ...

Hi, I'm going to review your poem using ocean terms. The beach: The emotions, impeccable. I wasn't expecting the shift, but it was amazing! It was a seamless shift, at ...

Hi, I'm here to review your poetry using ocean terms: The beach: The word choice is utterly amazing. The imagery is jaw dropping. The tone is mind blowing. I would ...

I'm going review your poem with ocean terms. The beach- I really like how the narrator explains how a one sided love can feel, they obviously love them, living every ...

Hi! I really like this, but are you okay? The lines are so raw and painful, the narrator shifts from sad to angry, to almost resignation. I'm guessing it's about ...

Hi, I really liked your poem. I've never been a musically gifted person, but I've always thought it was like this. Free, light, and perfect. A fast escape into the ...