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Re: I'll see you soon
Hello Imyourdensity! First off this is a very good poem! It was nicely written and flowed rather easily. It depicts the emotions and possibilities of such situations rather nicely! I ...
Jan 17, 2013 -
Re: Don't Forget To Remember Me
Hey it's Soulkana here! I must say I really loved this story! It has very good description and feeling that makes it very exciting to read. While looking through it, ...
Sep 1, 2012 -
Re: Have you Ever
I liked this poem very much. It carries a lot of emotions and feelings as well as ideas that people sometimes don't think of. I liked the ending because that ...
Sep 1, 2012 -
Re: I'm Not Crazy
Hey, I really liked this story! It flowed right and kept my interest! I couldn't find any spelling errors so I think that's good xD. I really did like how ...
Sep 1, 2012 -
Re: Threads of Fate: The priest and the demons. pt.1
Okay I have some things that I should point out. Mostly its spelling and grammar. But I really do love this story. Just going to check over the spelling. A ...
Feb 1, 2012 -
Re: Nothing at All
Well that was inspirational and a bit confusing...was the subject just meant to say we do nothing at all? Either way I didn't find any spelling mistakes and it flows ...
Jan 22, 2012 -
Re: The Puppet's Dance
Hello Smiley! I absolutely loved this!! So gripping it pulls me in with the first sentence! I really can't find anything wrong with grammar or spelling or plot line...never been ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: Broken Heart
Hiii BrokenSkye!!! First of all I wanna shout, "THIS WAS AMAZING!!!!!!!!" Haha
Nov 24, 2011 -
Re: Moonlight Serenade Chapter 1
Hey Adriana sister ^^ I have a few corrections if I can find it haha Chapter 1 - Edward It was sunset in the glorious city of Summerfell and even ...
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: Blowing Flames
SOLV-IMOUTO!!!! I love this darling
Nov 17, 2011 -
Re: The Half-Breed's Eyes (1)
Hello Wandless! I want to say I really loved this, but like Maria said the escape is a bit confusing. I loved everything else and can't wait to read more!!! ...
Nov 10, 2011 -
Re: Sugared Venom, my Sweet Temptation
Hello, Veritas! Must say I loved this, very powerful emotion in this only recommend is to shorten the longer lines or split them up so all the lines are at ...
Nov 10, 2011 -
Re: Hemorrhage
Hello, Venture~! ^^ I'm here to review for you today...first off I truly loved this! Very gripping and kept me wanting to read til the end which is fantastic
Nov 10, 2011 -
Re: letting go
Hi tennis!! Wanted to pop in and read one of your works and my opinion?? This. was. amazing!!!! Hahah. I love it. Made me want to read more which I ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: RaquƩl: Outside Looking In
Okie first off I loved this very very much haha. The only thing I can honestly think wrong is this part: Just by simply ignoring their vicious threats and warnings, ...
Oct 4, 2011
