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Soulkana

Soulkana

  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: I'll see you soon

    Hello Imyourdensity! First off this is a very good poem! It was nicely written and flowed rather easily. It depicts the emotions and possibilities of such situations rather nicely! I ...

    Jan 17, 2013
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: Don't Forget To Remember Me

    Hey it's Soulkana here! I must say I really loved this story! It has very good description and feeling that makes it very exciting to read. While looking through it, ...

    Sep 1, 2012
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Have you Ever

    I liked this poem very much. It carries a lot of emotions and feelings as well as ideas that people sometimes don't think of. I liked the ending because that ...

    Sep 1, 2012
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: I'm Not Crazy

    Hey, I really liked this story! It flowed right and kept my interest! I couldn't find any spelling errors so I think that's good xD. I really did like how ...

    Sep 1, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Threads of Fate: The priest and the demons. pt.1

    Okay I have some things that I should point out. Mostly its spelling and grammar. But I really do love this story. Just going to check over the spelling. A ...

    Feb 1, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Nothing at All

    Well that was inspirational and a bit confusing...was the subject just meant to say we do nothing at all? Either way I didn't find any spelling mistakes and it flows ...

    Jan 22, 2012
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Puppet's Dance

    Hello Smiley! I absolutely loved this!! So gripping it pulls me in with the first sentence! I really can't find anything wrong with grammar or spelling or plot line...never been ...

    Nov 29, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Broken Heart

    Hiii BrokenSkye!!! First of all I wanna shout, "THIS WAS AMAZING!!!!!!!!" Haha

    Nov 24, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Moonlight Serenade Chapter 1

    Hey Adriana sister ^^ I have a few corrections if I can find it haha Chapter 1 - Edward It was sunset in the glorious city of Summerfell and even ...

    Nov 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Blowing Flames

    SOLV-IMOUTO!!!! I love this darling

    Nov 17, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: The Half-Breed's Eyes (1)

    Hello Wandless! I want to say I really loved this, but like Maria said the escape is a bit confusing. I loved everything else and can't wait to read more!!! ...

    Nov 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sugared Venom, my Sweet Temptation

    Hello, Veritas! Must say I loved this, very powerful emotion in this only recommend is to shorten the longer lines or split them up so all the lines are at ...

    Nov 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Hemorrhage

    Hello, Venture~! ^^ I'm here to review for you today...first off I truly loved this! Very gripping and kept me wanting to read til the end which is fantastic

    Nov 10, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: letting go

    Hi tennis!! Wanted to pop in and read one of your works and my opinion?? This. was. amazing!!!! Hahah. I love it. Made me want to read more which I ...

    Nov 8, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: RaquĆ©l: Outside Looking In

    Okie first off I loved this very very much haha. The only thing I can honestly think wrong is this part: Just by simply ignoring their vicious threats and warnings, ...

    Oct 4, 2011


Fairy Tales are more than true; not because they tell us that dragons exist, but because they tell us that dragons can be beaten.
— G.K. Chesterton