Soulkana

Okay, well it is a challenge to critique this since its such a lovely piece of poetry! You seem to use love and blood through out this in different contexts ...

The script was intriguing. I can't wait to read more of this if you do make more. Anyhow, I am here for a review. The Line: Dr. Ralston: Not good. ...

Okay, I really loved this chapter. However, you need to proofread because there are many spelling and grammar errors in it. Also, you seem to throw everything out and it ...

Hi, black! Soulkana here to review! First off, I enjoyed this chapter very much. He stood, the wind whipping his long black hair about his scarred face, on the northern ...

Hello, Soulkana here to review! Okay, I found some spelling errors here! I have never met my father or my mother or I have but was too young o recall ...

Well, I'm here again! "The temperature dropped and just a few yards in, the midday light had been completely blocked out by the thich foliage." Here I am assuming you ...

Well, this was an interesting chapter as well! Seems like there might be something wrong that will happen when they leave, per chance? From how the Koog reacted to their ...

Hello, my names Soulkana and I will be reviewing for you today! Well, you have an interesting story that is for sure! I will be delighted to read more later ...

Wind! I'm here again! Great piece of poetry, I must say! Good imagery and what else, lol. I find it hard to follow with the short and longer lines, but ...

Well, this was most definitely an interesting chapter, wind! I was confused at the beginning since I have not read any of the other chapters which I will be sure ...

Well, Mochi I'm here to review for you. I must say I will have to read your first chapter in order to understand some of this. I think overall that ...

Okay tteele my name's Soulkana and I'll be reviewing this lovely poetry today! Kay lets start out with the I absolutely love this poem for the following reasons: You show ...

Scarlett Darling! Must say I truly like this story! Well I must say, that the third? paragraph is rather hard to read considering its all one giant paragraph which I'm ...

Hey Shulchan! My names Soul and I'll be reviewing this piece. I must say I truly enjoyed the imagery that your work brings. You have a lot of commas and ...

Hello Tavaril! First let me say, "Welcome to Young Writers ^^" I hope you enjoy it here and I must say this is rather well written to me. You forgot ...