Soulkana

Distant familiar memories flashed through my head sending emotions of both happiness and sadness, mostly sadness through me. Images of a newborn baby with distinct brown eyes smiling and crying ...

I really liked this although it does seem to be slightly cliche to the plot but that doesn't stop the fact this was really well done. You have talent and ...

Like Amfliflier pointed out in the review why didn't they tell her? I"m confused; Will you add that later on or no? Either way this was very well done haha. ...

This was very beautifully well done in my opinion! I hope that you write more of this so I may keep reading!!! I found some mistakes but those have already ...

I like this a lot!!! This made me smile and also reminds me of an old story I might think of rewriting now! Haha. Good job and I can't wait ...

Hmm this is a very interesting and compelling piece of work!! I can't wait to read more!!! Your descriptions were good and it gave me a good picture in my ...

Very descriptive and it pulled me in on the first line! Keep up the good work!! Your descriptions painted a very vivid picture in my head and I could emotion ...

Like I said in the other review this would be good for you to space out the paragraphs and dialogues so its easier to see who is talking and such. ...

This made me sad but I really liked it. I hope you continue on. I have one tip which is separate the dialogues so it is easier to read and ...

Wow this was really really long!! I also learned things about this haha. It reminds me I need to do my debate for Pros and Cons of Same Sex Marriages ...

This was good. The descriptions left a very good picture in my head. I also could feel the emotion in this. You did a very good job and I couldn't ...

Pain was hidden , shallowly in the palms of his Should this not be her? Since the next sentence says her skin? That means its a girl feeling the pain ...

Amelia I must say this is vey well done. The description makes this stand out and paints a very vivid picture in my mind. This is very good. I can ...

Pain seared across Alec’s palm, a brilliant light filled his vision. “Alec, we are the Academy. The only safe place for you now, you’ve been marked out as a mage ...

This was really good it flowed very good and the descriptions really brought life into this. I really enjoyed it and I can't wait to read more of your works ...