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Hahaha, you're right about Allan. All he is right now is "Husband" *_* You're also right about how the conversion scene needs changes. I'm going to do a complete rewrite ...

I did draw the picture, thanks. :) As I mentioned in the description before the song, yes, the timeline is a bit loose. When Joab lived on earth, he didn't ...

Hi! Thanks for the review! I'm so glad you noticed what you noticed. I did actually used the word "mystery" very intentionally. You're right that people don't tend to question ...

Thanks a lot! Those are all really helpful suggestions!

Ech, the repetition of "technical" there is horrid. Forgive me.

In fact, I had virtually no technical premedition for this song, and I have very little technical knowledge of music myself, so I found your technical analysis of it very ...

Thanks! But I'm not taking out the repetition of "Lord". It's the result of affection, not of nervousness or of trying to make the song "work". I want to repeat ...

These are my own lyrics, though you could say I heard them somewhere. This whole song came to me in a flood while I was praying in a chapel, so ...

Oh my gawsh, your characters are so cute.

Well, there's passionate atheists and casual "atheists" just like there's passionate Christians and casual "Christians". Casual atheists or agnostics wouldn't force their kids NOT to go to youth group

I agree with your exclamation point suggestion. :3 I'll fix that in my rewrite. Janet doesn't show empathy in the argument because she's trying to protect her heart. If she ...

Thanks! I'm interested in your curiosity about Michelle's and her husband's religious background. So far, I've been simply thinking that she and her husband were casual atheists/agnostics, but their s

Lol, thanks for confirming this for me: I've been in doubt about the demon-face thing since I wrote it. XD "Is it cheesy, or does it work?" I'd ask myself. ...

Thanks for the suggestions! I do want to add impact to Jason's and Sam's deaths, but the reason that there isn't much detail is this: Originally, I was keeping these ...

Thanks so much, SilverFox! You might be in for a surprise at the direction this story will take, although the "Jigoku Shoujo" series itself is always exploring unexpected happenings with ...