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This is going to be a shorter review (with more general impressions rather than specific nitipicking), but I liked this chapter too! It does seem, though, that we've slipped into ...

Oh my goodness. I'm impressed. The voice of your comments and reviews is so excitable and abrupt that I honestly expected to see the same abruptness in your stories, but ...

Amazing. It's amazing how you used the very rhythm of this poem to convey meaning almost as much as the words themselves. I read it three times, and then I ...

Well. After reading this all the way through, I had to go back and re-read some parts. It seemed extremely surreal the first time I read it, but not quite ...

Since Bailey has been to Heartbeat Academy before, her anxious reaction to the sight of it is quite a foreshadowing. What happened to her there last year, I wonder? ""I ...

It's become stylish to criticize churches, but what you have here is different. It's honest and real, and I'm frankly amazed. It broke my heart, actually, especially the lines: "And ...

Oh, so now I know why Mario didn't drive Toby all the way to Silenda. It sounded like a pretty straightforward reason, so for a brief time, I wasn't suspicious ...

Another great chapter! I'm especially glad to get to know Walter more--a remarkably optimistic character. In fact, I don't have any criticisms until after the first story break. There are ...

Yay! I was so excited when I got the message that you'd posted another chapter, and now I finally have the chance to read it! :D My first suggestion has ...

Ah, back to good ol' Avery Trent. I'm still laughing at every turn in this story. I doubt Jason was actually thinking of a completely unrelated joke when he fell ...

Wow. This is amazing. The pacing, the rhythm, the tell the truth, I really enjoyed it. I wouldn't say it's very deep, sure, nor hilarious necessarily, but it certainly was ...

I feel like I just woke up from a REALLY weird dream. o_O Um, I'm not really sure what to say here. It just really, truly felt like a crazy ...

Bailey Kowala! Awwww yeeeeaaah~! Perfect name for her! “Can I use the bathroom please?” “I don’t know,” the lanky Asian teacher said. “May you?” -I laughed so much there. Classic! ...

Wow, Toby really misses Dr. Blade too. Well, leastways he's as shocked as I am. After all, Dr. Blade played a crucial role in saving his life. Anyway, another excellent, ...

"They wouldn’t have to move into a trailer park because of me, and Mom might get to sleep in a bed again." heart. I love his mom so much now. ...