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Aha! I came looking for a second chapter. I wasn't disappointed. :) Time for another review! Your descriptions are impeccable, as usual, and I love how you're revealing your world's ...

Hello! It's Songy here for a review. :) Just so you know, I usually write my reviews AS I'm reading the chapter, rather than afterwards, so that I can record ...

Hi! I've finally made it back around to "Avery Trent"! Since I'm trying to focus on clearing the Green Room now, I just read the earlier chapters, but I'm going ...

Okay, I can't wait another day. I'm going to go for this right now. “I keep meaning to tell you,” Bailey said as we laid on top of the main ...

You're so good at writing metaphorically! What amazed me the most about this piece was the gentle but poignant transitions in my emotions as I read it. At first, it ...

It's Review Day, and I don't know what to do right now (even though I feel like I have tons of stuff to do), and all I can think of ...

Hooray! I have a chance to write a review on Review Day! Oops, the name "Goulagh" just caught my eye while I was writing this (I haven't actually started reading ...

Hi! I'm back for another review. I was excited to see that you posted Chapter Thirty-Six, and I'm sure I'll get to read it before I leave for Zambia. Can ...

Whoa such font. Very title. “I wish I could do better, but it’s sort of hard…I’m still adjusting to having missed so many years, I guess.” *frowns* That's right, he's ...

I really enjoyed your description of Katie sneaking out of her room at night. For some reason, that sort of thing feels all cozy and exciting to me: sneaking out ...

Why we were wearing sunglasses at one in the morning was beyond me. One in the morning?! How did it get to be one in the morning? o_O Have they ...

Hi! I'm back for another review! It was Kaien Fioralia! Ohmygod! My heart slammed violently in my chest a million miles a minute. Double score for the fan girl! Sheesh, ...

Continuing on to the next chapter! "I am listening!" I argued and my bottom lip curled out into a pout. Heh heh--this is a good reminder that these boys are ...

Hi! I'm back to the continue the story! I was trying to clear up the Green Room when I started, but I guess this story is having no trouble leaving ...

That was lovely! When, at the beginning, you said it was "free-form" and "probably breaking all the rules", I decided I would read it aloud to see whether it flowed ...