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Thanks Sushi! However, I don't think I will change this. Maybe I will write another story with the same point and the like, but I didn't really write this to ...

Wow, thanks Mess! I did work very hard on this. :) And I didn't mean to send the message that it is hard to find God, but that there are ...

This is beautiful, defiant. The symbolism and imagery are perfect. My favorite line was, Then left them on the ground Next to me and my heart And the last one. ...

There certainly is. That's why I loved this. :)

Featured! See, you are awesome! :)

Hey, thanks for the review! We will definitely look into those points. I agree with the transition bit. This was a bit of a test-write, if you know what I ...

Thanks Sophie! I will take that into consideration.

Wow, thank you Mystery! That means a lot. :)

Thank you!

Thank you, Subtle.

This is beautiful. Unique, poetic, and beautiful. It deserves to be a featured work, really. Thank you for making this.

Thank you. I can't even imagine what it must feel like to lose your only child at such a young age. It makes me happy to think about Kyli having ...

Thank you Shea! Welcome to YWS, by the way. Glad you enjoyed it! :)

Thanks AE! I just thought, I write so much depressing stuff, and I felt in a calm mood, so why not write a happy poem for once? I think I ...

This is realllllly great. Geez girl!