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I'm genuinely curious. Was there a reason for that depiction? Were you trying to relate him to the parents at the scene somehow?

Hey DrFeelGood. I appreciate you trying at a poem about such recent horrific events, and I think you are trying to get a good message across, but here's the thing. ...

Thank you! I based this off of a trip I took to Kenya, and what I see in my own country. Thanks again!

Thanks for the review! I'll look into that.

This made me cry. I thought it would be a joke, but it was so touching instead. Thank you.

Wow. Thank you for such a beautiful review. This means a lot. Poems are so incredibly hard to review, yet this is one of the best I've received. Thank you. ...

Thank you. :)

Thanks for the review! I'll definitely look into that. :)

How has this not been introduced to me‽ We can make this a thing. It's too cool to be passed up. *nods* :D

No problem! I really liked it. :)

Thank you!

Thank you!

Thanks Gravity! The format for the poem that I was trying for was that the first stanza was from the girl's POV, then the guy's, then together. Hope that helps ...

Thank you!

Yes, that is the concept. First the girl POV, then guy, then both. :) Thanks!