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Re: I Want a Heart
Truant! O.O *spazzes* That was amazing oh my goodnesssss. This was so chilling, so beautiful, and so unique. I can't even-- gah. Science fiction plus horror was such a great ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Fly Boy: Chapter Two
O.O OMGersh! Thepartwherethefeathersburstouttotallytookmebysurpriselikewhatjusthappenedohmygersh. It's Angel all over again!!! *ahem* Well, that was an beautiful chapter. I loved the introduction to t
Jun 23, 2014 -
Re: Fly Boy: Chapter One
Hallo, Truant! Vanishing Blue, here for you! (heh.) Yayyyyy startling endings! Something we have in common! Poor Blane. First off, I thoroughly enjoyed your characters. I loved the names, the ...
Jun 23, 2014 -
Re: Out: A Simple Conversation.
Hey Strange! Night here for a short review. Well, your name certainly matches my opinion of this poem. It was quite odd. But not in a bad way! I enjoyed ...
Jun 19, 2014 -
Re: We are all equal. For we live under the same sky.
Hey Alex! Griff here for a short review! First off, I liked the message calling for peace and acceptance, even though I may not completely agree with it all. I ...
Jun 19, 2014 -
Re: Flirtatious Glances, Secret Desires (Excerpt)
Hello! NightCrawler here for a short review. Wow. That was really intense. I really enjoyed it. It was a lot like a story I have started writing, with two falling ...
Jun 17, 2014 -
Re: Smile
Hello, icannothearthings! Night for a short review. I enjoyed this. Is it based off of something or an original work? I thought it was based off of something but I'm ...
Jun 17, 2014 -
Re: The Wolves Prey - The Deer gets the last laugh
Hello Wolves! Night here for a short review! First off, welcome to YWS! Hope you like it here. Alright. So I'm going to be pretty blunt with you here: This ...
Jun 16, 2014 -
Re: "A Day in the Life of Jack"
Hey there, Night here for a short review! First off, Jack the Ripper. Nice! I mean, not nice, but interesting topic for a poem. It took me by surprise, too. ...
Jun 16, 2014 -
Re: the apostle
Hello, Bethany! Night, here for a short review! Wow. This is so good. The vocabulary, the style choices, and the flow were really well thought out and interesting. I actually ...
May 23, 2014 -
Re: All I Want
Hello, Talia! Night here to review! First off, wow. I really loved this. These are lyrics? Do you have a song to go with them? In my mind, I heard ...
May 23, 2014 -
Re: Goodbye...
Hello, buddingwriter, Griff here for a short review! First off, I really enjoyed this. The lyrics were very inspirational and thought out. Do you have music to go along with ...
May 10, 2014 -
Re: Taste the Sorrow - Part one of Ch. 1
Hey Holy! Great job on the first chapter, the prologue definitely drew me here. So this is good, but not nearly as fantastic as the prologue, if I'm being truly ...
May 7, 2014 -
Re: Why I hate the past tense.
Hi, retro. This is a beautiful poem, and very personal, I'm sure. You are extremely talented, I see you featured nearly every day. This topic struck close to my heart, ...
Apr 22, 2014 -
Re: Life Counts
Oh, wow. This is beautiful, the imagery is amazing. I love how you used measurements and percentages for items that aren't necessarily tangible. My favorite line, ever, it made me ...
Apr 21, 2014
